You, a complex
sentient being, surviving in your small lifeboat of your creation on the ocean that is life,
are constantly assailed by a variety of problems always chipping at your
thoughts, threatening your fragile
lifeboat to transform into a floating tomb. As your life continues to float
along on its due coarse you find that many of these problems will establish
dominance in your life, even controlling your actions to focus solely upon them
and deny you small times of merriment.
These problems
manifest themselves in many ways in Yann Martel's Life of Pi. Pi, thrust from the comfort of the womb that is
the Tsimtsum finds himself thrown into
the beginnings of his lifeboat. He already finds himself facing several
problems. First of which being the one that manifests itself in human nature
more times then we can admit, ignorance. It seeks safety from the supposed battle against it; it finds a host on which it
proceeds to manifest itself into the worst parasite. One that posses a
something to pity, well it slowly destroys you from the inside. Just as the zebra seeks safety on Pi's boat,
breaking it's leg, and therefore in Pi's eyes becomes something to pity, well
in reality its scent is driving the hyena to a frenzy. Which brings us to our
next symbolism, the hyena.
"I am not one
to hold prejudice against any animal,
but it is a plain fact that the spotted hyena is not served well by it's
appearance, it is ugly beyond redemption." The hyena is the most
noticeable and fearsome of Pi's assailants. The hyena represents the underlying
problem that is the stem of all your troubles. With the Zebra representing
ignorance, it's very presence is a danger to Pi as it is the usual prey of the
hyena, and even worse wounded, as ignorance allows problem to grow to
uncontrolled. When the hyena finally kills the zebra, it represents the
shattering of ignorance, as the problem is allowed to grow out of control,
until finally the problem can be ignored no longer, and runs rampant in your
mind. Once the problem has shattered your ignorance the "tiger in
you" you will jump to the task and destroy the problem.
These problems will
assail you throughout life, so the lesson to be learned from this is to never
let ignorance become your parasite, or your hyena will become out of control.
I especially enjoyed the way you are including higher level of analysis, but at the same time, the voice tends to lose the reader, because the way you go from abstract idea to abstract idea without taking the time to make each point clear. This is an important point. even if your ideas are profound, if there is not clarity, all is lost for the reader.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This was a great piece. At times your vocabulary was so advanced that I was struggling to understand. You also had a lot of good points in this piece that were great but you could have been able to extend them a little bit more. This was an overall amazing piece...nice job!
ReplyDeleteI'm very glad that you are trying to expand your vocabulary, but I must say that it feels like you are trying too hard to use large words and, frankly, I kept loosing you when you were reading. I think it's great that you are analyzing the zebra and relating it to real. Also, I wasn't sure which prompt you did, so maybe you should include it in your author's note.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece. Your voice is very apparent in this piece, and your vocabulary is very high-level. I think one area to grow in would be to spend more time discussing one singular idea instead of many. By including so many, you may lose the reader. Your ideas are so interesting and insightful, I'd like to have more thoughts on just the one topic. You've grown a lot as a writer, reader, and analyzing literature throughout the year. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis piece had some really strong points, and you were able to analyze the text very well. You responded accurately to the response and did a nice job following your thesis. Your vocab, while vivid and strong, sometimes sounded a little choppy. Overall this is a nice post.
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